Question

介紹你朋友王峰的家鄉:
1.他的家鄉是無錫，是一個非常美麗的城市，這兒的空氣清新。
2.住在一個現代化的城鎮，鎮上有個劇場，還有一個美麗的公園。
3.早晨人們喜歡在公園慢跑；公園是他最喜歡的地方，因為在那可以和很多朋友聊天。
4.他非常喜歡他的家鄉，我們在盼望游覽他的家鄉。
Wang Feng is a friend of mine.
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Answer 1

Wang Feng is a friend of mine. His hometown is in Wuxi. It is a beautiful city.The air is fresh here.He lives in a modern town.There is a theatre in town.There is also a beautiful park.People like jogging in the park in the morning.The park is his favourite place because he can chat with many friends there.He likes his hometown very much.We are looking forward to visiting his hometown.

             
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，主要用一般現在時態進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如like doing sth, chat with sb ，look forward to doing等短語，文中還用到了原因狀語從句The park is his favourite place because he can chat with many friends there. 文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。