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請以“My Day”為題寫一篇短文敘述一下自己一天的生活學習狀況．中心應明確，切忌寫成“流水帳”，要求100詞左右．

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學生：習作： My Day 　　I get up at five in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my tooth(X1). I have a breakfast(X2) at six then I go to school by a bike(X3). I get to school at about seven. Class begin(X4) at eight. me have eight classes every day. Me have lunch in the middle of the day. 　　School are over(X5) at about four in the afternoon. After school We clean our classroom Then we go home. 　　We have supper at about six. After supper I do my homework. I go to bed at nine in the evening. 　　This is my day. How busy I am! 　　剖析：1．tooth應改用復數形式teeth． 　　2．三餐飯前一般不用冠詞，所以a應去掉． 　　3．by bike是固定用法，應把bike前的a去掉． 　　4．主謂的數要一致，可改為Class begins或Classes begin． 　　5．School是單數，所以be用單數is． 　　總評：作者以時間為順序敘述了自己一天的學習情況，行文流暢，中心明確．但對英語基礎知識，尚需努力學習．