Question

根據所提供的信息，寫一篇關于你的朋友的英語短文。（開頭已給出）

要求： 1．字數60字左右。

2．內容全面，表達完整流暢，可適當發揮。

3.文中不出現真實姓名、學校名稱等信息。否則不得分。

 

Answer 1

I have a good friend,Jenny Smith. She is 13 years old and her birthday is October 28th. There are four family members in her family, her parents ,a dog and she. She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer. On Monday morning she is busy. from 8:00 to 12:00, she has science class,English class,math class and a basketbal game. She is interested in science , English and the basketball game ,but hates math. At twelve ,she has lunch.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要介紹好朋友的年齡、生日和喜惡。全文主要用一般現在時態。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如用 be fond of,be interested in,be crazy about等短語來表達喜歡，避免like重復使用；多次使用并列句如She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer.，使文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。