Question

請(qǐng)以 “My School Life” 為題寫一篇70詞的英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.學(xué)校大而且漂亮，有三棟大樓，一個(gè)圖書(shū)館，里面藏書(shū)很多。

2.上午9:00開(kāi)始上課，下午4:30結(jié)束。

3.我們不需早起，有大量時(shí)間從事課外活動(dòng)。每天只有半小時(shí)作業(yè)。

4.我們的課程有語(yǔ)文，數(shù)學(xué)，地理，電腦等，我最喜歡。。。，因?yàn)椤！！?/span>

5.我們有許多興趣小組和課外活動(dòng)。在班上我參加的俱樂(lè)部最多。

我們總是玩得開(kāi)心。

 

Answer 1

My School Life

I love my school very much. It's very big and beautiful. there are three buildings and a library with a lot of books in it .We have lessons from 9:00 a.m to 4:00 p.m.

Every day we only need to spend about half an hour doing my homework so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. We also have many interest groups . I took part in the clubs most in the class. best of all ,we needn’t get up early.

We have many subjects,such as Chinese, math, geography, computer and so on.My favourite subject is Chinese .because l learn a lot from our chinses teacher.she is popular with us .

We always have fun in my school.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料非常詳細(xì)，一共五個(gè)要點(diǎn)。主要介紹學(xué)校的環(huán)境，作息，活動(dòng)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: a library with a lot of books ，enough time to take part in，took part in，best of all，and so on，is popular with等。有等學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),靈活運(yùn)用。同時(shí)連詞的運(yùn)用也使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。