Question

10．假如你叫Linda，住在Yushancun小區，請你根據提示以"My Community"為題，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文向大家介紹你生活的小區．
寫作提示：1．小區里人們的情況；2．小區主要布局；3．談談自己生活在里面的感受．
溫馨提示：短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學校名稱．
My Community
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I live in a small community，which consists of only ten families我住在一個只有十個家庭的小的社區里．
which引導的非限制性定語從句，修飾 community．
【高分句型二】
our community is so small that everyone knows each other．我們的社區是那么的小以至于每個人都彼此認識．
so…that如此…以至于…，that引導的結果狀語從句．

解答 My Community
I live in a city，since I was small，our family moved to a community，I live in a small community，which consists of only ten families【高分句型一】（布局）．In fact，our community is so small that everyone knows each other．【高分句型二】I have lived in the community for about ten years．I spend my childhood here，I make many friends，I get to know all the children here．I am so happy to live in the community，people here just like a big family．In the morning，the old like to dance and walk in the community，while the young do some jogging．In the afternoon，kids play together after school．At night，most people go out in the square after dinner，they share the things happened on that day，people laugh happily．（人們的情況）The community is a big home for me，I know everyone here，it is a paradise．（感受）

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