Question

請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示和要求以Welcome to _____________為題介紹一處你喜愛并熟悉的地方。
內(nèi)容提示：1. 按空間順序介紹該地方的環(huán)境和方位。
2. 介紹該地方的活動或特點。
3. 詞數(shù)在80詞左右。
4. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，地名，校名。
Welcome to _________________
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Answer 1

Welcome to Beijing
Dear friends,
Welcome to Beijing. Beijing is a beautiful city with long history. Now let me tell you something about it.
In Beijing, there are many places of interest. The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors. You can learn much about the history of China from it. The Summer Palace is very beautiful. It is well-known all over the world. Tian’anmen Square is a good place to take a walk.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Beijing.

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。題目要求寫一篇關(guān)于介紹某地的文章，來談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh。作文要點已經(jīng)給出，可以分段分別論述所給要點，注意作文的連貫性，做到流暢、自然。最好使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。
【亮點說明】本范文中提到一些常見短語let me tell you something about讓我告訴一些關(guān)于……的事； there be 有……固定句型；learn much about 學(xué)到關(guān)于……的很多東西。The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors這個句子中one of 加名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示……之一。It is well-known all over the world.這是全世界聞名的，it代指頤和園。Tian’anmen Square is a good place to take a walk.天安門是散步的一個好地方，這個句子中運用to do 做后置定語來修飾a good place.