Question

你在美國的筆友Sam 二月份要來北京游玩，他向你了解北京有哪些地方可參觀。請根據要求用e-mail向他作介紹。

詞數100左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數，盡量用上以下提示詞

提示：capital, tourist attraction, the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace, spend summer time, Beihai Park, the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders, be proud of

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I’m very glad to hear that you will have a chance to come to Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s an old city with a long history. There are so many tourist attractions in Beijing. You can visit the Forbidden City which was the Imperial Palace in Qing dynasty. The Summer Palace is also a good place to visit. It’s the place that emperors and their family spent summer time there. It’s so beautiful that people often lose themselves in it. You can go round other places of interest as well, such as Beihai Park. But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. It’s worth visiting. We Chinese are very proud of it.

I can show you around Beijing when you come. I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據話題內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，句式，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可適當發揮。結合話題可知本文時態一般應該用一般現在時，注意情態動詞后面動詞用原形。為了使表達更有邏輯性，可以使用連接詞等。此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀題目，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。

【亮點說明】亮點一：But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. 但在其中，長城是世界七大奇跡之一，也可能是最有名的一個。

亮點二：It’s worth visiting.。這是值得一游的。

亮點三：We Chinese are very proud of it. 我們中國人都為它而非常自豪。

亮點四：I can show you around Beijing when you come。你來的時候我可以帶你參觀北京。

亮點五：I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.我期待著盡快見到你。

考點：話題作文。