Question

16．目前安慶正在積極開展創建"全國文明城市"（a national civilized city）活動．作為一名中學生應該積極參與此項活動，可以從身邊小事做起，從校園文明開始，和父母共同行動起來．假若你是李明，請你寫一份倡議書，建議青少年在校園和其它公共場所做到：
1、愛護并美化校園環境；2、尊敬師長，團結同學，誠信互信；3、遵守學校規則，積極參加學校活動；4、告訴父母…
注意：1、文中不得出現真實姓名、校名；2、將第四點作適當補充；3、詞數80-100，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear friends，
Our city is trying to set up a national civilized city．As a student，I think It's our duty to do something for it．What should we do？
                                                                
Let's start now to make our city better．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I think it's our duty to do something for it．我認為為它做點事是我們的責任．這是一個賓語從句，I  think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．it's our duty to do something 做某事是我們的責任．
高分句型二 
it's necessary to tell our parents the importance of being polite in public and of taking up good habits．有必要告訴我們的父母在公共場合禮貌和養成好習慣的重要性  這是it is+形容詞+（for sb．） to do  sth．句型，對于…來說…是…的．

解答 Dear friends，
Our city is trying to set up a national civilized city．As a student，I think it's our duty to do something for it【高分句型一，注意從句的使用】．What should we do？First of all，we should try our best to protect the environment．We should pick up litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．On the contrary，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．【要點一，愛護并美化校園環境】Second，we should fill the world with love．We should show respect to our teachers，and also care for each other and help those in need．The most important point is all of us must be honest in our daily lives．【要點二，尊敬師長，團結同學，誠信互信】Finally，we should obey the school rules and take an active part in school activities【要點三，遵守學校規則，積極參加學校活動】．What's more，it's necessary to tell our parents the importance of being polite in public and of taking up good habits【高分句型二，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．We'd better ask them to join us．【要點四，告訴父母…】
Let's start now to make our city better．
Li Ming

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．