Question

8．假如你是Zhang Li，在英語學習中遇到了以下問題，請你給英語報社編輯Mr．Friend發一封電子郵件，向他咨詢并希望得到他的幫助．

My problems

1．對學習英語不感興趣； 2．記憶單詞有困難； 3．怕出錯，不敢參與小組討論； 4．閱讀中不知如何處理生詞； 5．寫作中…（至少自擬兩點）

要求：1．所寫短文必須包含以上要點，可適當發揮；
2．層次清晰，語意連貫，中心突出，書寫規范；
3．詞數不少于90詞，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Mr．Friend，
I'm very pleased to write to you．      ．
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Li．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words．
句中使用短語有"be interested in sth 對…感興趣"、"have difficulty doing sth  做某事有困難"．這句話意為：我對英語不感興趣，而且記新單詞有困難．
高分句型二：
I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart，but I always forget a lot．
句中使用短語有：spend+時間+doing sth 做某事花費多長時間；try to do sth 盡力做某事．這句話意為：我很用心地花了大量時間在學習新單詞上，但是我總是忘記．

解答 Dear Mr．Friend，
I'm very pleased to write to you．I am not getting along well with my English．（開篇點題）I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words．【高分句型一】I am afraid of making mistakes and I am afraid to discuss in groups．Besides，I don't know how to deal with the new words in reading．I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart，but I always forget a lot．【高分句型二】And I find grammar is too difficult for me．I can't make complete sentences and I often make mistakes in grammar．（學習英語的困難）What should I do？Please give me some advice．（尋求幫助）
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Li

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．