Question

書面表達（本題共10分）
假如你是李華，請圍繞以下幾個方面給你的筆友Tom寫封信，談談你期末考試后假期的打算。 （開頭和結尾已給出）
1. 經過繁忙的復習、考試后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜歡做的事……
2. 多與父母交流，幫助做家務。
3. 參加社會實踐（如：幫助老人、殘疾人(disabled)等），增加對社會的了解。  
注意：1. 文中不能出現自己的姓名。2. 字數：80詞左右(已給出的句子不計入總詞數)。
DearTom,
How are yougettingonthesedays?I’vejust finishedmyfinalexam.          
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,  
How are you getting on these days? I’ve just finished my final exam. After working hard for a long time, I really want to have a good rest during the winter vacation. First, I’m going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books. Then, it’s time to communicate with my parents. I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them. Besides, I plan to help do some housework. At last, I hope to be a volunteer, helping the old and disabled as much as possible. In this way, I can know about the world better.
By the way, how will you spend your vacation?
Best wishes!

試題分析：對于書信的文體，要注意與對方的互動就行進行面對面對話一樣，所以結尾可以問問他是如何安排的。本文中首先對考試后自己想休息一下進行總的描寫，然后分三到四點內容進行講述我要做些什么，對最后一點做法的意義進行一下說明，這樣體現出詳略得當，最后詢問他會如何安排，顯得親切得體。
點評：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對于要做的幾件事情，寫的過程中通過變換句式和用詞上來提高語言的美度。在一件事情寫完后要用上表關系的連接詞，或平時積累的各類表遞進、并列的連詞來是文章富于活力。在平時的練習中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患。