Question

你們班將以夢想為主題舉辦一次演講會，請你以我的夢想為題寫一篇演講稿，演講應包含以下幾個方面的內容，并可以適當發揮，字數80-120詞。
What’s your dream?
How will you achieve your dream?
When your dream comes true, what will you do?

Answer 1

My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up. I want to help those sick people.
I know , to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school. I’ll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients. After that , if I have a chance, I plan to open a hospital of my own. Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors. I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer.
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。本文介紹自己的夢想，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，從三個介紹了自己的夢想，夢想是當一名醫生；怎樣實現自己的夢想；實現夢想后怎樣做。to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school.句型的運用也讓文章增色不少。