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目前，九年級的同學們學習任務繁重，易產生焦慮等情緒。你的朋友Simon以往性格開朗，最近因感覺壓力大而變得少言寡語，與同學溝通困難；他在英語學習上有困難，而且考前緊張失眠；因父母讓他放棄他喜愛的籃球活動而與父母吵架。假設你叫Joe，請根據Simon的問題，給他寫封E-mail，提出解決方案。

要求：1、針對問題，用不同的方式提建議，其中包含虛擬語氣。

      2、語言流暢，語法正確。

      3、詞數:80 – 100。（開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）

Dear Simon,

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Best wishes,

Joe

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Simon,

    I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3. I’m writing to give you some help.

    You used to be outgoing and now you don’t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. So you don’t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often. As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practice more after class? Learn to relax！Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.

    I hope what I said could help you.

    Best wishes,

    Joe

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫為什么寫信給Simon,Simon的煩惱是什么和他給Simon的建議。全文主要用一般現在時態，還用到了虛擬語氣。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如used to be ，get along well with ，communicate with，as for，take a long walk， pay more attention to,instead of 等短語，虛擬語氣 If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.，文中還用到了賓語從句 I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3.。文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。