Question

作為一名已參加過體育中考的畢業生，你對中考體育考試也一定有自己看法和做法，請你為學校網站寫一篇稿件，與七八年級的同學們分享你的心得。內容包括：
你認為今年汕頭中考體育考試滿分提高到40分好嗎? 為什么？
你或你的同學之前在體育考試備考中的具體做法。（至少兩點）
呼吁七八年級的同學們重視體育鍛煉，為體育中考做好準備。    
作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。
2．語句連貫，詞數80個左右。 作文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。
As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3 students in Shantou are 40 points this year. 
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Answer 1

As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3 students in Shantou are 40 points this year. This is good for students. We will exercise more so as to stay strong and healthy because of this new policy.
Take me as an example. In order to get good grades in the P.E. test, I listened to the teacher carefully in the P.E. class, and did everything as the teacher showed us. What’s more, I made plans to get enough but not too much exercise, about thirty minutes every day. I also ate and rested properly to make sure that I had energy all day.
My suggestions for Grade Seven and Eight students are as follows. First, you’d better pay great attention (attach great importance) to the physical exercise. Second, don’t wait until you are in Grade 9 to begin exercising! Make good use of your time to get ready for your PE exams now!網

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文題材緊扣學生學習生活，使學生有自我發揮的空間。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘話題內涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時適當使用連接詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了大量的常用的句式和短語，如：as we all know、be good for、so as to、take me as an example、in order to、get good grades、did everything as the teacher showed us、What’s more、make sure、had better、pay attention to、make good use of、get ready for以及序數詞first、second等，這為文章增色不少。學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。