Question

暑期就要到了，請你以Jill的名義給英國筆友Linda 發一封電子郵件談談你的暑假安排。
要求：1、自主發揮，語言通順。
2、80詞以上。郵件的開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Linda,
I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming soon._______________________
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Jill

Answer 1

One possible version:
I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming soon. I stall have enough time to do many things of my own. First, I am going to spend a week in the countryside with my grandparents. I really miss them . Then I’ll travel to Guilin with my parents. I’m sure we’ll have a great time! After that , I’ll come back and finish my holiday homework. I’ll also going to take some extra lessons to improve my studies. Besides, I’ll take enough exercise every day to keep healthy. How about your vacation plan?
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Jill

這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。給出的材料比較簡略，我們所要做的首先是圍繞要點組織材料，然后應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題，時態一般是一般現在時態，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。