Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)，請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李華，收到你的筆友Jim的來(lái)信，信中談到他最近沉迷于電腦游戲中，他認(rèn)為這不僅有損身心健康，而且還影響學(xué)習(xí)，為此，他很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容，給Jim寫一封回信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及建議。

Dear Li Hua, These days I always play computer games for a long time. As a result, it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time. Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons. I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health, but I can’t stop doing it. I’m angry with myself. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Please write to me soon. Yours, Jim

 

Dear Jim, Don’t be angry with yourself.                                                   Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
Don’t be angry with yourself. I really feel worried about you. I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time playing computer games. It is bad for not only your study but also your health.
As a student, schoolwork is the most important thing for you. So remember to finish your homework first after school. And it’s also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free. That will help you forget computer games. What’s more, you’d better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class. I hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。本文材料主要通過一份來(lái)信給出，故動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信，爭(zhēng)取對(duì)來(lái)信內(nèi)容都有所回應(yīng)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。