Question

書面表達。

     假如你叫李明，是高州市潘州中學(xué)初三（1）班學(xué)生，已經(jīng)通過了廣東省著名學(xué)校高州中學(xué)的入學(xué)
考試（entrance examinations）。離開學(xué)校之際，你用英語給你的英文老師，正在廣東教育學(xué)院作短暫
學(xué)習(xí)的陳校長寫一封信。全信要有120個詞左右，信的要點見后面，但不要逐字翻譯。信的開頭和結(jié)
尾已為你寫好。請你把要表達的內(nèi)容寫在答題卷上書面表達的位置上。
     (一) 告訴他你已經(jīng)考上高州中學(xué)。三年來他一直教你的課，由于他的幫助，你的成績一直很好，
英語科尤為優(yōu)秀。
     (二) 就要離開學(xué)校了，給他提些建議，希望學(xué)校會越辦越好。
1．學(xué)校要鼓勵學(xué)生參加實踐活動，學(xué)生們應(yīng)該有足夠的運動和娛樂。最好星期六和星期天不要補課。 2．學(xué)校應(yīng)該對那些成績不好的學(xué)生給予更多的關(guān)注，他們不是“問題少年”，不應(yīng)該被拋棄，他們
      需要老師的關(guān)心和幫助。如果大家一齊努力，他們將來一定會成功。
3．學(xué)校應(yīng)該更多地幫助生活困難的學(xué)生，他們家里窮，很難支付得起子女受教育的費用。如果得不
      到幫助，這些同學(xué)會輟學(xué)。但他們中一些人成績非常好，應(yīng)該完成學(xué)業(yè)并進入更高一級學(xué)校就讀。
4．學(xué)校要美化環(huán)境，多種樹木，尤其是果樹。
Dear Sir,
     How are you!                                                                                                                                 
                                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                    Yours Sincerely
                                                                                                                                     Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
     How are you! I have passed the entrance examinations to Gaozhou Middle School, which is very
well-known throughout Guangdong Province. You have been teaching me English since I came to our
school three years ago. Thanks to your help, I always get good grades in my study. My English is
particularly excellent.
     Since I'm going to leave our school soon, I would like to give some advice as follows.
     1. The school should encourage the students to take part in practical activities. They should have
enough sport and entertainment. It will be better if there are no lessons on Saturday and Sunday.
     2. The school should pay more attention to the students who get bad grades in study. They are not
"problem teenagers". They shouldn't be discarded. They need the teachers' help and care. If everybody
works together, they will be successful in the future.
     3. The school should give more help to the poor students. Their families are poor and are difficult to
afford to pay for their education. These students will drop out of school without help, though some of
them can do well in study. They should finish their education and go to higher schools.
     4. In order to make our school more beautiful, more trees, especially fruit trees, should be planted
around the school.
     I'm sure our school will be better and better in the future. Yours Sincerely Li Ming
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