Question

假如你是Lily，你的同班同學(xué)Lin Mei 想認(rèn)識(shí)你的好朋友Jack。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息，用英語寫一封e-mail向Jack介紹Lin Mei。郵件的格式和開頭已給出，70詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Name	Lin Mei
Age	14
Birthday	June 20th
Favorite food	Ice-cream
Favorite color	Blue
Favorite sport	Basketball
Favorite subjects	P.E., English
Telephone number	265-4328
E-mail	linmei@sina.com

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
My classmate Lin Mei wants to know you. She is 14 years old. And her birthday is June 20^th. Ice--cream is her favorite food. And her favorite color is blue. She likes basketball most. Of all the subjects, she likes P. E. and English best. Her telephone number is 265-4328. Her E-mail is linmei@sina.com.
I hope you can become friends with her. We can play together then.
Best Wishes,
Lily

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照作文要求結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇介紹好友的文章，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含好友林梅的年齡、生日、最喜歡的食物、顏色、運(yùn)動(dòng)和課程等幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行陳述。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了好友林梅的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，句式運(yùn)用較為靈活，沒有使用一貫的同一個(gè)句型，顯得句式變化多變.如Ice--cream is her favorite food.，And her favorite color is blue.，She likes basketball most. Of all the subjects, she likes P. E. and English best.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。