Question

假如你叫王芳，最近在網上交了一位來自英國的筆友Mary，請根據以下要點給Mary寫一封不少于100詞的e-mail，介紹自己的情況。

要點：

1.王芳，15歲，雙子座(Gemini)，家住姜堰；

2.喜歡讀書、旅游和交朋友；

3.最喜愛的顏色是紅色，因為紅色是一種強色，象征力量和強烈的情感;

4.對英語很感興趣，會唱很多英文歌曲；

5.班里的一些同學也很想找外國筆友，希望得到幫助；

6.有機會希望去英國學習。

Dear Mary,

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Yours

Wang Fang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

I am Wang Fang, a middle school student in Jiangyan, and I am 15 years old now. I am Gemini, so I am curious about everything. I like reading, traveling and making friends. I enjoy a lot communicating with others.

My favourite colour is red because red is a kind of strong colour. It represents power and strong feelings.

I’m interested in English, too. I can sing lots of English songs. And I think writing to you in English will help me a lot in learning English. By the way, my classmates want to make pen-friends with foreigners, too. I hope you can help them.

I hope I can study in Britain later. If I have a chance to your country, I hope to meet you.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Wang Fang

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

考點：關于應用文的寫作

點評：注意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題，時態一般是一般現在時態，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。