Question

假如你叫李華，是初三（2）班的一名學生，你所在學校的 “愛心俱樂部 (Helping Hands Club)” 將吸收新的成員。你想加入該俱樂部，請你根據(jù)你自己的擅長，平時的愛心表現(xiàn)以及參加愛心俱樂部的目的寫一封自薦信。收信人是高先生.(15分)
詞語：name, student, Class 2, Grade 3, member, hard, be good at,
get along with, join

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Gao,
My name is Li Hua. I’m a student from Class 2, Grade 3. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. As a student, I work hard at my lessons. I am good at English and do well in both speaking and listening. Besides, I am easy to get along with and enjoy helping others. On my way home I often help the people who are in trouble. When I see old people or children cross the street, I usually help them. If I join the club, I will do more for others. I’ll be glad if I am received. I am looking forwards to getting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照題目要求完成這篇自薦信的寫作，我們要用恰當?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含個人的基本信息，自己的擅長，平時的愛心表現(xiàn)以及參加愛心俱樂部的目的等幾個方面進行陳述，表達出自己想入會的愿望等。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了自己的基本情況，并包含了文中所要求的個人全部信息，包括愛好、特長平時的愛心表現(xiàn)和入會目的等都有所交代。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含狀語從句的準確使用可圈可點.如 am good at English and do well in both speaking and listening.，When I see old people or children cross the street，I’ll be glad if I am received.，學習中再注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。