Question

假如你是Lucy，你的好朋友Maria得了重感冒，頭痛，喉嚨痛，發(fā)燒。你得知這件事情之后，寫一封電子郵件表達關(guān)心并提出一些合理建議。字?jǐn)?shù)：至少70詞。(注意書寫格式)
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Answer 1

Dear Maria,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a bad cold.You said you had a headache,had a sore throat,had a fever.I think you should drink lots of water,take your temperature and then go to see a doctor.You shouldn’t go to school,you could have a rest at home and take some medicine that the doctor gave you.Don’t worry.I hope you’ll be better soon.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：I’m sorry to hear that you have a bad cold.had a headache,had a sore throat,had a fever.You shouldn’t go to school,you could have a rest at home and take some medicine.I hope you’ll be better soon.等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。