Question

書面表達（20分）
根據下列遂寧二中八年級三班學生上學方式的調查表，用英語寫一篇短文。不少于70個單詞。

上學方式	bus	walking	bike	car
學生人數	18	12	25	no
原因，理由	far fron school	good for health near the school	like riding not very far from school	be not allowed (不被允許)to drive car

 

Answer 1

There are fifty-five students in Clss 3,Grade 8 at No.2 Middle School in Suining.
Every day they go to school in different ways. Eighteen students go to school
by bus because they live far from the school. Ten students walk to school.
They think walking is good for health and they live near the school. Twenty-five
students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes and their home is not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car because students
are not allowed to drive car to school.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹一般班級的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵單詞等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般現在時態，人稱較為復雜，注意主謂語之間數的問題。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。