Question

雷鋒走了，卻留下了他那崇高的精神。或許在你的眼里耳里，總會看到聽到一些冷漠的表情和言語。但每每聽到一句“世上畢竟是好人多啊！”類似的話，你們會有何感想呢？請根據你的所見所聞來呼吁一下社會對“愛”的召喚，寫一篇《Let the world full of love》（80字左右）
先讀下面一片短文，從中提出信息，寫一篇感想。
There are so many things happening around us every day. Most are good things . But a few are bad things. Last night, while I was watching TV, a reporter said a little girl called Yueyue died from an accident. But she added sadly: There were some people walking by the poor girl but nobody helped her to move to the side except an old woman, and just then ,she was alive, after all. It made me feel very sad.

觀后感	呼吁
1．…cry,  made sb. feel sad	1．It’s one’s duty to …
2． so poor , people passing by ,move ,side, be saved	2．care the people in trouble
3． so little ,so helpless, can’t believe my eyes and ears	3．make our world…,be filled with….…
4．…..	4．……

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Answer 1

Let the world full of love
While I was watching the report about a little girl called Yueyue on TV, I was crying. It made me feel very sad and angry. That little girl was so poor. If one of the people passing by at first moved her to the side, maybe she could be saved .She was so little and helpless. I couldn’t believe my eyes and ears. I didn’t know what they were afraid of. I only know everyone should help anyone in trouble.
In my opinion, it’s our duty to help people in trouble. We should care for everybody and everything around us. If so, I think our world will make more and more peaceful and beautiful., because the earth is our home.
Let the world full of love!

解析這篇文章的話題是關于雷鋒的話題，要點是以表格列出的，學生要連詞成句，將要點寫全，寫齊。觀后感和呼吁還要求學生自己發揮。寫作時要注意用些高級詞組，，made me feel very sad， care for句型I didn’t know what they were afraid of. it’s our duty to help people in trouble.還要有關聯詞。Besides，First ，Second,這樣文章會更流暢。