Question

七歲的女孩Mary來(lái)自美國(guó),在日常生活中，她喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，喜歡去動(dòng)物園。她家里有一臺(tái)電腦，她通常在周六玩電腦游戲。她的媽媽每天都會(huì)在網(wǎng)上搜索信息,，有時(shí)還進(jìn)行網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物。她的爸爸喜歡在網(wǎng)上看足球比賽，還經(jīng)常在電腦上玩游戲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇短文介紹她及其家人。
要求：
1. 條理清楚、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。
2. 至少60詞。

Answer 1

Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中用了一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)：be from來(lái)自某處；  like doing喜歡做某事；  listen to 聽(tīng)；search for 尋找；go shopping購(gòu)物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞，形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)句子，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。