Question

假如你是Joe, 你的朋友Dennis轉(zhuǎn)到新的學(xué)校后給你來(lái)信。他說(shuō)在新學(xué)校老師對(duì)他很好，但他沒有朋友，功課也學(xué)得不太好，因此感到很沮喪，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，給他提一些建議或忠告，要求80詞左右。
Dear Dennis,
I’m glad to get your letter,……

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Dennis,
I’m glad to get your letter, but I am worried about you and I am going to give you some advice to help you out. I know it’s difficult to lead a happy life without friends. But don’t worry about it too much. I think if you try to be nice to everyone, you will make new friends. Why don’t you talk to them about hobbies such as sports? As for your lessons, please believe yourself. Just as the saying goes, “nothing is impossible”. Work hard to catch up with others. It’s a good idea to ask your teachers and classmates for help. I am sure you can do better in your new school. Cheer up and come on!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Joe

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)Dennis所遇到的問(wèn)題提出合適的建議，這些問(wèn)題都是學(xué)生日常生活中所遇到的問(wèn)題，難度應(yīng)該不大。但是在寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)該利用所學(xué)詞組和句型，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了but, as for等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:it’s difficult to do, why don’t you do? ask sb for help等。