Question

某學校將每年的3月5日定為愛心志愿者活動日，今年活動的主題是“人人為貧困孩子獻愛心”。請你以學生會的名義寫一份倡議書，內容要點包括：
許多孩子因貧困而上不起學；（too…to…）；
在冬天，很多孩子沒有暖的衣服穿。他們沒有足夠的書籍，沒有書包；
有些學校離家很遠，每天很早就起床，要花費一個半小時的時間到達學校。（far away, it takes …to do ）；
我們能為他們做的是……（至少2點）。
文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。要求60詞左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.         ______
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Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文進行了較為全面的說明，能用簡短的詞匯表達出提綱的內容，并且進行了適當的處理，準確的添加自己的觀點，同時使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。