Question

寒假期間，你和你的家人或朋友去哪兒度假了？談談你認為寒假期間最有趣的一次旅行，說說你的所見所聞，同時你對暑假旅行又有什么期待和計劃呢？（詞數80左右)

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Answer 1

I had a good time during the winter holiday. My family and I went to the west lake and saw beautiful scenery. We went sightseeing, shopping, enjoyed some special snacks and learned more about the culture and history of Hangzhou city. To my joy, I made a few new friends there. The most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves! I want to visit the Great Wall during the coming summer holiday. Maybe then we will have a better time and learn more about our culture.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇開放作文。本文要求文章的提示并結合自己的寒假經歷完成這篇作文，我們要用恰當的語言把所列舉的內容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含寒假中和家人的旅游地方，表達出旅行中的所見所聞，并寫出暑假中旅行的期待和計劃等方面進行陳述，表達出自己的觀點等。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般過去時態，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地描述了自己的寒假旅行歷程，并表達出了暑假的期待和計劃，符合文中的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含表語從句的準確使用是本文的一大亮點.如To my joy，The most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves!，have a better time，學習中再注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。