Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一 個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   My friend Linda and I have set up small organization called Delivering Smiles with my mother. Linda and I do all of the work like collect toys and picture books. Before a month of collecting these things,my mother takes us to the hospital that she works as a nurse. When we take what we had collected to the hospital,my mother brings us to differently children's rooms. We let each child pick out of what they want. We sit in each room for about ten minute,talking to and playing with each child. When I give a little of my time for children in the hospital and when I see their smiles,we feel quite happy.

Answer 1

1 .…small organization called ...   small 前加a

2. . .. like collect toys ...   collect→ collecting

3. Before a month ...     Before→After

4. . .. that she worics as ...   that where

5. . .. we had collected to...   had→have

6. . .. differently children’s rooms.   differently→different

7. . .. pick out of...    去掉 of

8. …about ten minute …    minute→ minutes

9. . .. time for children ...    for→to   

10. . .. we feel quite ...    we→I