Question

你是一名高三學(xué)生，經(jīng)常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見，今天你跟媽媽達成一致意見。請根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容，以 An Argument 為題寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。

母親	兒子
高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重， 看電視浪費時間	學(xué)習(xí)一天很疲勞，看電視可以放松一下
兒子自制力差，看電視會影響視力	看電視也可以增長知識，了解國際國內(nèi)大事，緊跟時代
周一至周五不準我看電視，但在周末允許我看新聞、文藝、體育或科普類節(jié)目

注意：1．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2．要根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，但不要逐字翻譯；

3．可以適當增添合乎情理的過渡性語言。

An Argument

I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother ________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day’s hard work.. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.

【解析】

試題分析：這是提綱類作文，題目以表格的形式給出了寫作內(nèi)容，還以文字提示形式提出了話題。本文的重點是表格中兩種觀點的對比，并用恰當?shù)恼Z句表達出來。要注意簡單句和復(fù)雜句結(jié)合起來使用，富有變化，要學(xué)會使用銜接詞和過渡詞。過渡詞猶如橋梁和粘合劑。恰當?shù)氖褂眠^渡詞可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散，層次不明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。

【亮點說明】I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. 這句話用了whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, hea-vily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV.這句話用了同位語從句和too…to….句型，It se-ems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to wa-tch TV too often. 這兩句話是it做形式主語， Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. 這句話用了倒裝句，Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.這句話用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句。

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