Question

校園安全（schoolyard safety）很重要。構建平安校園，保護學生安全越來越為社會所關注。請根據下面的提示，用英語寫一段話，談談作為一名中學生，怎樣才能保證自己在校期間的安全（80—100個單詞）。
提示：1.按時上下課，不遲到早退（go to school on time）。
2.不在樓道里追逐打鬧，不打架斗毆（chase each other in the hallway,fight）。
3.不喝酒，不吃腐爛變質的食物（don’t drink, food that goes bad）。

Answer 1

Now schoolyard safety is becoming more and more important. Being middle school students, what should we do to keep ourselves safe?
Firstly, I think we should go to school or go home on time. If we are late, we should tell our teachers or parents. Secondly, we should be friendly to each other. We can’t chase each other in the hallways or fight with each other. That’s dangerous. Maybe we can fall off or be hurt. Thirdly, we can’t drink wine or eat food that goes bad. They are bad for our health.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文，題中給出了主題和寫作要點。作文中一定要包含所給的要點，各個要點內容要有序的結合起來，可使用一些承接性的短語和句子。另外，文中注意主謂一致等問題。
【亮點說明】這篇文章要點齊全，結構完整，表達準確流利。文中使用了Firstly首先, Secondly第二, Thirdly第三, 來增加文章的結構。文中使用了很多短語，例如on time 及時；be friendly to對……友好；fall off跌落；be bad for對……有害。