Question

8．假如你和幾個同學(xué)上個星期天外出郊游、野餐．請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記，記下這次愉快的周末郊游．
提示：
1、天氣晴朗，爬山很開心；
2、在山頂欣賞美景（enjoy beautiful scenery）、拍照（take photos）；
3、中午在山腳下野餐（have a picnic lunch）、在山谷里玩游戲（in the valley）；
4、西山美麗風(fēng)光讓我們流連忘返（enjoy oneself so as to forget to leave）．
注意：1、詞數(shù)80-100（開頭和結(jié)尾都已給出，不計入總數(shù)）；
2、短文條理清晰，不可直接全文照搬提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3、文中請勿提及學(xué)校和個人的真實信息．
Sunday，May 1st，2016．Clear．
I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday．
                                                            
We had a great time at West Hill．It was a pleasant trip．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 We were happy to climb up to the hill．我們爬山很開心．be happy to do sth．高興做某事．
高分句型二
 We were busy enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill．我們忙著欣賞美麗的風(fēng)景，在西山的山頂拍照．be busy doing sth．忙于做某事．

解答 Sunday，March 6th，2016．Clear．
    I had a trip with several of my friends last Sunday．
    It was fine．The sun was shining warmly．We were happy to climb up to the hill【高分句型一，注意be happy to do sth．的使用】．【要點一，天氣晴朗，爬山很開心】
    The blue sky，white clouds，fresh air，green hills，beautiful flowers，quiet forests，singing birds and flying insects made a beautiful picture at West Hill．We were busy enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill．【高分句型二，注意be busy doing sth．的使用】【要點二，在山頂欣賞美景，拍照】
    At noon，we had a picnic lunch at the foot of West Hill．Then we played games in the valley【要點三，中午在山腳下野餐、在山谷里玩游戲】．Beautiful scenery at West Hill made us enjoy ourselves so much as to forget to leave．【要點四，西山美麗風(fēng)光讓我們流連忘返】
    We had a great time at West Hill．We were tired but happy．It was a pleasant trip．

點評 動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．