Question

Nick的美國(guó)筆友Bob向他詢問(wèn)他和他的妹妹Linda及他兄弟Tom的業(yè)余愛(ài)好 假如你是Nick 請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格給Bob 寫(xiě)一封信介紹一下。 開(kāi)頭已給出。

People	Hobby	How long	How many
Nick	收集貝殼	5年	大約220枚
Linda	集郵	自從她十歲以來(lái)	300多枚
Tom	收集硬幣	3年前開(kāi)始	200多枚

Dear Bob,
I received your letter this week. Linda，Tom and I have different hobbies.
 
 
 
 
Yours,
Nick

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
I received your letter this week. Linda, Tom and I have different hobbies. We all like collecting things. I like collecting shells, I have collected them for 5 years, and I have about 220 shells now. My sister  Linda likes collecting stamps, she has collected them since she was ten years old. She has more than 300 stamps now.She says she can learn a lot from these stamps. My brother Tom likes collecting coins, he has collected them since 3 years ago, now he has over 200 coins. He still wants to collect more coins.
Can you tell me your hobby?
Yours,
Nick

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