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書面表達（滿分15分）
眾所周知，控制情緒，保持積極樂觀的心態(tài)，才能讓生活充滿幸福和快樂。那么如何讓自己幸福快樂呢？本期英語黑板報的“Think and Write”欄目的征稿話題就是“Learn to Control Your Feelings”。請結合表格中的提示，寫下你的感悟與大家一起分享吧。

The importance of controlling feelings	Controlling feelings is important.
	We can find better ways to solve the problem.
	Controlling feelings can help to make friends with more people.
	Bad feelings can cause some trouble.

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。        2. 可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Learn  to  Control  Your  Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
Learn to Control Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time. If something bad happens to you, what will you do? Will you get angry?
I think at that time you should control your feelings. Controlling feelings is important to us all. If we control our feelings well, we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem. Also controlling feelings can help us to make friends with more people. Bad feelings can make you lose friends and cause you some trouble. So we should learn to control our feelings and make our life happier.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)及情態(tài)動詞的表達方式。聯(lián)系實際，例舉控制情緒的好處，建議人們學會控制自己的感情。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些過渡詞，and then，also，So為文章增色不少。寫作時就可以適當運用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
考點：提綱作文。