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17．根據中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于70詞的回信．信的開頭和結尾已經給出，其詞數不計入所完成的回信內，請不要寫出你的校名和姓名．  假如你是Dr..Know，收到Jim的來信，信中談到他最近沉迷于電腦游戲中，他認為這不僅有損身心健康，而且還影響學習，還影響了與爸媽之間的交流，為此，他很苦惱．請根據這封信的內容，給Jim寫一封回信，談談你的看法及建議．

Dear Dr．Know， These days I always play computer games for a long time．As a result，it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time．Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons．I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health，but I can't stop doing it．And because of this I can't get on well with my parents．I'm angry with myself．What should I do？Can you give me some advice？Please write to me soon． Yours， Jim

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I don't think①②it's right to spend too much time playing computer games我認為花太多時間玩電腦游戲是不對的．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

【高分句型二】
It is bad for not only your study but also your health不僅僅對學習不利對健康也不利．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…

解答 Dear Jim，
Don't be angry with yourself．I really feel worried about you．I don't think it's right to spend too much time playing computer games．【高分句型一】It is bad for not only your study but also your health【高分句型二】（看法）．
As a student，schoolwork is the most important thing for you．So remember to finish your homework first after school．And it's also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free．That will help you forget computer games．What's more，you'd better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class．I hope my advice can help you．（建議）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Dr..Know

點評 做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．