Question

書面表達(滿分15分)

過馬路闖紅燈近年來已成為社會關注的熱點話題，請結合下面的一則報道和圖片。寫篇英語小短文，詞數在100字左右。短文應包含以下幾個方面：

1. 簡單描述圖片內容；

2. 談談你對此類行為的感受或看法。

3. 提出解決此類問題的合理建議；

（參考詞匯：run a red light ,be punished, build more footbridges / underpasses, keep orders）

注意：

1、語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；

2、文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。

A Report from People’s Daily

"Chinese style of crossing the road" is a ridicule(調侃)used by the net friend. It describes a way of some Chinese walking across the road, namely "enough of a person can go（湊夠一撮人就走）, not red light”. Just look at other people and do not see the light. It is generally believed that as long as we cross the road together, no car dares to hit us. Here is one of the excuses given by a pedestrian (行人).

Reporter：You know, you can’t run a red light, can you?

Pedestrian：No, I can’t.

Reporter：But why did you do that just now?

Pedestrian：I am in a hurry. I’ll be late for work.

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Everyone knows rules are made for people to follow, not to break.             

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Rules are made for people to follow, not to break. When people cross roads, they might be in a rush for doing something, so they don’t care about the traffic rules. In this picture, groups of people are going across the road while red lights. The harm for this is that the cars would not expect the people walking across the street while the red light, and may even cause accidents.

There may be different reasons in different people. Probably you would be late. So next time, you’d better go out earlier. Someone may say since there is no car, he can cross the road. But for your safety, please wait a minute. Do not follow the ones who lead themselves to danger! I think everyone should obey the traffic rules At the same time the government had better build more footbridges or underpasses.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料為一幅圖片，故動筆前先要認真觀察圖片，了解圖片所蘊含的信息。寫作中應先簡單描述一下圖片內容，及中國式過馬路的特點，并分析原因，提出自己的建議。然后列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，句式，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可適當發揮。結合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時態一般應該用一般現在時。注意情態動詞should后面動詞用原形。適當使用連詞，序數詞，注意從句的應用，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。