Question

假設你將代表你校2013屆畢業生在學校畢業典禮上發言，請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，發言稿的內要點如下表所示。

回顧	在美麗的學校學習了三年; 將會永遠記住它 老師們總是盡力把課上得生動有趣 課余生活豐富多彩; 參加這些活動很有樂趣 學到了很多知識; 也取得了很大的進步
感謝	老師和父母的支持和幫助
祝愿	……

注意：

發言稿須包括所有的要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

表格中”祝愿”一欄，請用自己的2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當發揮；

詞數80個左右，發言稿的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates.

It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. _________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.

Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.  

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇發言稿，首先是回顧過去，所以本部分應該用過去時；然后是感謝應該用現在時，最后是祝愿，可以用將來時。由于本發言稿是代表同學們做的，故人稱應該用we，不要用I。應注意連詞和固定短語的用法，注意書寫時應該包括所以內容。

考點：提綱作文

點評：本題的難點在于確定文章的時態及人稱，很多同學會用第一人稱進行書寫。其次，對于提綱作文，書寫時一定要有層次性。